I Wonder Why

[cutepuppylover]

Sometimes I wonder why
I wonder why birds fly
I wonder why shoes tie
I wonder why people say "yummy"
I wonder why people like gummies
I wonder why, I wonder why

[cutepuppylover]

I love coffee
I love tea
I love you
Do you love me?:yawnb:

[Adolescent09]

Truly immaculate usage of the terms "I wonder" and "I love"... because as a 6'3 black boy of integrity I can veraciously say "I do both"!

It's interesting although I can tell you are joking around. I'd be honored to have the privelege of reading your actual poetry though... and welcome to the sight! Enjoy your stay for as long as you're here and as long as you're alive (who knows what can happen to you, I or anyone else at any given time? :()

Once more, enjoy.

[Pensive]

I love coffee
I love tea
I love you
Do you love me?:yawnb:

I really loved it! Made me laugh out aloud, and yet feel bad. But it's very true if one looks around and see how easily people are ready to tell their girlfriends/boyfriends/other people that they love them. And when it comes to being faithful to that love, they don't be. After all, they love coffee and yet they can survive without it....

[Pendragon]

It is good, reminds me a whole lot of Langston Hughes: seemingly simple rhymes, a whole lot of meaning! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/RoseDance.gif