poem of my own...tell me what you think

[dumwitliteratur]

HEART BREAK

All my worries just disappear,
Protected by this with you so near.
Sitting silent with you by my side,
Worried you'd find out how hard I tried.
Caring that maybe by being all that I could be,
You didn't want to be with someone like me.
Trying to make you like me isn't working,
So what is the point of even trying.
Knowing that our feelings aren't the same
Doesn't mean that I think you are to blame.
Maybe in the future my feelings will change;
I will happily move on to another stage.
So happen what may;
Time will soon pay.


Let me know what you think of me poem plz! Thanks! :)

[lalaine]

Hi,

It sounds pretty cool. In fact, I also have a similar composition which I made in one of my depressed moments. If you want to read it, I would be very glad to share it with you. Keep writing-it is very healthy and very rewarding!

[Pendragon]

Nice. I like the last two lines. Shows hope in disappointment. http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Bravo.gif

[dumwitliteratur]

Thanks lalaine and Pendragon. Glad you liked it and I will keep writing for sure. It's a hobby of mine and I don't think I would ever give it up. Thanks again! :D