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Demian
04-24-2007, 05:36 PM
My insolent brother is breaking my hand over timbers,
the swirling eye of hindsight is shivering down in splinters.
Swing, now! Down my Eddy to barges of great livers--
opened wide like a flood of gypsies bursting forth in large rivers.

Sing, dam you, sing! Of dropsy and tipsy the twins i made
down the hall of splintered spleens and apropos.
"I Do Not Lie!!!" cries the host and he
drags me down with him into violent gales of agony
awash in the eventide of Bacchus' crimson fiddles.

Melodious monks have stolen my ham,
and now you skip like a girl to the ague of hellish prayers!
Sing, dam you, sing!!!
My fiendish foes have won me over...


with kind regards to Ezra Pound...:crash:

Adolescent09
04-25-2007, 12:24 AM
Man I LOVE this--especially the humour. Such original insight, Demian! Rock on :D

Pendragon
04-25-2007, 09:47 AM
It is well written and I cannot find anything negative to say about it, really.
I am afraid Ezra Pound is not my cup of tea, but if not for differences this world would bore the human race into extinction very quickly! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Geezer.gif