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Avalive
04-02-2004, 12:54 AM
<A Season In Hellii>

You wake up
Follow the sun

No bible in hand
A piece of patisserie rotted
My skin left on you
A stranger's face
Yersterday wasn't pale

A season in hell
Darkness wears a tutu turning around
No stream flirts with a drunk boat
No sinner gathered
Sun is absent

Winter invited summer to come
Spring's jaw down
Fall falls with lonely sound

A season in hell
Bodies knot
Tireness not

Wake up
Your face appers not
Blank painting
Rain runs into my veins
Sleep a sleep
A transparent dream

A season in hell
Hands hold not
Nothing attacks my fort
Frozen soil
Blissfully bites my feet
feu de joie (french, means salute)
An honored lamster runs

Up wake, up
Birds stole my tart
Steal a kiss over my lips
Your color is on me
Unfailing breath blows my walls
Shake the sheet
You disappeared underneath

Wake up ,up
My Muse is drawing a mouse-like potato
Fills me with loveliness

A season in hell
Sleep a sleep
No gate to Mecca
Wake up
Wake me up
No gate to hell

Baptised in a coffee bath
Follow time
Head for Halidom

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den
04-02-2004, 01:41 AM
Very interesting ...

I like the absurd juxtapositions you suggest here... tutus, drunk boats and whatnot. It's all lively and sinister at the same time! :D Love it.

Welcome to the forums Avalive.

simon
04-02-2004, 02:58 AM
Sinister is exactly the word that crossed my mind too den. Not a poem that leaves you feeling warm inside, but thoughful. Great.

Avalive
04-02-2004, 04:00 PM
Thanks for reading.
It was probably not written by me. I was thinking that maybe there were some playful spirits used my hand and pen for their little diaries. For this poem. After I finished it. I read. I love it.

simon
04-03-2004, 04:17 PM
Just try to capture those playful spirits again.

den
04-03-2004, 05:35 PM
Yea, that's a great way to see it Avalive, I wish I could access mine, I'm sure they're in here somewhere!

Avalive
04-20-2004, 07:28 AM
Inspiration needs trigger...