Always somewhere, but not there

[Rawznfaw]

I stopped doing poetry as a child around 5th grade. I find myself at the age of 25 being drawn back into it because of the way of life I lead. Just something a little short until I can learn how to flow I guess lol.

Being bored but being busy
And always at another area
Take true the times till tomorrow
Shines some sweet summer sun

[dramasnot6]

It is a sweet poem, but I am a bit unsure of it;s meaning, particulary:

"And always at another area"

[vodka]

read read read and write write write and eventually you will enjoy where it take you, i think.

jen

[Rawznfaw]

Im in the military specializing in communications and always on watch in different countries of the world. Thus always at another area and sometimes I never see the sunrise but only sunset which explains the last line.

[Virgil]

Being bored but being busy
And always at another area
Take true the times till tomorrow
Shines some sweet summer sun

I like this Rawz. Needs more though to be complete. Hope you stay around; we'll try to get you into it.

[Pendragon]

I agree with Virgil, nice start on the road to a beautiful poem! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/HandyPanda.gif