Trepidatious

[vhaney]

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[dramasnot6]

This is beautiful vhaney, I don't know why you think it's juvenile.
I am trying to pick out a particulary effective verse but this whole thing is just lovely. Your metaphors and word choice are especially nice and this poem makes for a very pleasant read.Great job!

[vhaney]

Thanks for the feedback. That was encouraging.
Perhaps I will try another.

[Adolescent09]

Great stuff vhaney, and welcome to the forums! You will enjoy it here. You have quite an original touch ;)

[vhaney]

Thanks 09. I do appreciate your kindness.

[Pendragon]

Van, that's not juvenile, that's poetry! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Appaluse.gif

[vhaney]

Hey Pen.
Thanks, I like your writings also.
So sad about V-Tech.