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ruchir
03-29-2004, 03:15 PM
Synergy weaving
As all threads in a bird's throat
burst in full a song

Suetang
03-29-2004, 10:28 PM
Great imagery from so few words.

Take care.........Sue

Stanislaw
03-31-2004, 06:58 PM
That is cool, I havent seen a poem like that since grade 7, cool.

ruchir
04-01-2004, 01:41 PM
Oh! it is a misplaced haiku meant to extend further the chain of shared haikus..

As i've placed it here, i would like to make it fuller..

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As all threads in a bird's throat
burst in full a song,
as i sing, would you in dance
accompany along?

Ah! why i ask?, just let me sing
to silence of your thoughts unknown

and you may rise from 'all alone',
to thud and bring
synergy weaving.