Midnight's Block...a Siesta..(I'm trying harder)

[Adolescent09]

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[Adolescent09]

I'm aiming for just a single-sentenced remark. Even if it is completely negative. I thank you people who haven't replied in advance ;).

[Adolescent09]

I'll bump this up once more..

[vhaney]

Adol, I like the falling off of thoughts, the mind searching for something not there, being overtaken by it's own unconciousness. Good piece in my opinion

[Adolescent09]

Jesus christ, I'm so happy someone actually replied. Thanks, vhaney.

[manolia]

I've read this poem yesterday i think. It's cute. It creates a very lively image in my mind of a sweet little boy/girl sitting in his/hers desk and trying to write something. It's nice and sweet (the poem). :)

[dramasnot6]

Clever poem adol :thumbs_up The second half reminded me too much of my own writers block :p

[Adolescent09]

Thank-you Drama :)

[Aiculík]

I love picture this evokes in my mind. :) I especially like the second part and the ending is just excellent!