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Suetang
03-28-2004, 08:45 PM
Arm in arm we walk together
As the waves lap at our feet
We pause to kiss each other
Oh so slowly our lips meet

Love grows freely in my heart
It blooms beneath the Summer sun
Every time we are together
It feels like love has just begun

Feelings beyond my comprehension
A sense of freedom fills my soul
To be lost in love forever
This would be my ultimate goal

When in your presence love consumes me
It fills each waking hour
In the garden of my heart
My love for you blooms like a flower

So much love could fill an ocean
Stretching far across the sea
It moves gently with the tides
From the heart and soul of me

As the light of day starts fading
The sky takes on a golden hue
And as we ride the waves of passion
I find that I'm anchored in you

Dyrwen
03-29-2004, 12:25 AM
Simply moving... I can almost feel what feeling is like just by reading this poem.

Suetang
03-29-2004, 10:27 PM
Hi Dyrwen

Your comment was so very much appreciated, thank you.

Take care........Sue

angel
04-05-2004, 10:02 AM
Hi .. this is really touching ...
the words seem to come out and reach straight to ones heart ...

Suetang
04-05-2004, 06:33 PM
Hi angel

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and I'm so glad you liked it.

Take care.........Sue

Kendall
04-07-2004, 09:48 PM
Ooo, I love it. Especially the end.

Suetang
04-07-2004, 11:13 PM
Hi Kendall

Thanks so much for reading my words, I'm glad you liked the poem.

Take care.......Sue

Kendall
04-11-2004, 01:21 AM
Oo, god. Each time I read this poem - wow. It's so awesome.

Suetang
04-11-2004, 05:41 PM
Hi Kendall

Once again I am so humbled by your words, thank you.

Take care

Sue