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Segafreak
03-27-2004, 11:47 AM
Need some feedback for this poem

A lot on my mind
At this moment in time
Wondering whether should I confess
How I feel about you
Now that I'm going away
Packing bags through the days
I will miss you so
Sorry for all the teasing
Going around you of late
My mistakes being the cause
Of redness on your face
Forgive me, all I ask
For my feelings for you
I'll bury and move on
If that is your will