{needs help with a title}

[spally]

so lost in this world
so lost inside
broken from the lies.
left so fragile,so cracked
left so afraid.
too alone to know better
too wrong to know right.
love left her dead
upon a broken world.
lies trapt her here
still hoping for more.
but she could not hope
to raise the dead from the earth.
cause heaven is to far gone
to give a damn now.
with all of the fear,
from all of the lies,
she still left her heart open
for him to find.
he was an angel
wings as dead as night.
whos words brought her from the dark
and showed her the light.
his words brought truth,
for this she could see.
his love was the purest that she'd never seen.

[B-Mental]

a title? I don't know that all poems need a title. I like this poem. I like everything, but the last two lines are confusing with the use of see and never seen. I don't know if it makes sense. Maybe its just me.

[Pendragon]

I will suggest a title, but I agree with B, that not all poems need them, although I usually title mine:

Even Angels Fall

Yours if you like it. http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/GuitarMan.gif

[B-Mental]

Nice Pen...It probably only took a fraction of a second to think of it too...I'm envious

[spally]

thanks, i know not all poems need titles. its just that most of mine don't. i guess i have a problem thinking of them. and thanks, i'm lad to know that not all my poetry bites. lol. OH pendragon, might i use that as the title? with credit to you of course.

[Pendragon]

thanks, i know not all poems need titles. its just that most of mine don't. i guess i have a problem thinking of them. and thanks, i'm lad to know that not all my poetry bites. lol. OH pendragon, might i use that as the title? with credit to you of course. You may. And without credit to me. It is your poem, and my free gift. http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/EasterCross.gif

[spally]

OH MY. thank you.

[brokenheartpoet]

I would use the frist two lines to get my title usually