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dyingflame
04-09-2007, 12:14 PM
Statue of A Woman

She was a statue of flesh and blood,
impermeable to the droplets that dripped
on wasted waterfalls of slime and mud
that clung to flesh and bit the lips that missed-

Acid rain was scrutinized. It fell away
But she never withered. She was steel,
stone, bone- smiling at the knight who forgot to kneel.

Drip, dew- remind us that dying hanged is to love,
and to hold the bending branch and smile at tears
in gnarled, young hands whose fingers curl
is to futilely clasp the ever-growing strains, laughing.

She loved the leaf’s first binding brown-
bursting buds to raise new blooms,
casting blood-clotted nets to span
an entire autumn-generated affair.

She now observes the bloom’s blood crimson
a thorn’s gentle kiss on sallow cheeks of white,
Where nights cut at cloths that know no spite-
low on setting suns the smiling sculptures
are loaded down by their sulphur treasures.

Adolescent09
04-09-2007, 12:37 PM
Ah, there you go hogging over people threads again huh, dying ;)? Oh well, your poem is great as well, nice job.

dyingflame
04-10-2007, 03:21 AM
I think the point of this forum is sharing; not hogging- suggesting possession over a thread seems absurd. This thread seemed to me the best place to post this- because the poem that opened the thread inspired me.
Isn't that wonderful? All works inspire other works. Thanks for the comment :) its just a draft; I'll have to work out the rough edges

dyingflame
04-10-2007, 09:58 AM
thanks to the mod ..or whoever moved it. the poem was inspired by "her ankles move" by Il Penseroso so thanks to him as well :) anybody who wants to write poems in the same vein can hog on my thread, dw- I think we should all inspire each other out here