coupled with thorns

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i've had "writer's block" for a while now, some may joke that i've never had "writer's flow", so this poem, which i like, but am not sure is quite right yet is the first for a while.
i would love any feedback on it, because to me it doesn't yet quite "flow", thanks

Coupled With Thorns

Listening intently gives right of passage,
To where even devils, would fear to tread,
Evangelic relics pose as vital directions,
I just don’t want to follow any more,
Your views make mine just that little bit stronger,
Hypocritical judgement simply isn’t fair,

Why do you still ramble?
As if there’s nothing to say
Is that really it, there’s nothing to say?
But I’m glued to you talking,
Standing with such conviction,

Maybe I should remember your history coupled with thorns,
Or maybe there is something more?
Past the point of thinking, simply knowing,
A way to live a life clean from regrets,

There’s something to find out,
…All in good time,


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