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.:Shadow:.
03-21-2007, 06:53 PM
Letting Go.

My heart belongs to another
Yet its you I love
Thinking about you for hours
You couldn’t possibly be the angel from above
What I feel is wrong
Is it love, or is it lust
Hours spent slaving away for you
But you only kick my feelings to dust
You toy with my heart
You play with my feelings
Recovering from a battle within
My bodies still healing
You’ve possessed my soul
Getting lost in your eyes
You screw me round, leaving me hanging
My rage only intensifies
You show off what you’ve got
Driving me insane
Sharing with everybody else
Leaving me nothing but pain
No matter what I do for you
The fire between us slowly dies
No matter how far I reach out
You ignore my cries
Maybe this is a simple message
It just wasn’t meant to be
I guess this is goodbye
I’m finally letting go. Setting my feelings for you free…

I havent written anything in about 4 months.
So I gave it a shot the other night.
Feed would be nice. :)

hockeychick8792
03-21-2007, 07:02 PM
I enjoy this poem. It is kind of like what is going on in my life, but I still can't let him go.
Enough about my issues. I believe this is a pretty well written poem for not have been writing in four months.

.:Shadow:.
03-21-2007, 07:14 PM
Thank you. :)

Yeah, its kind of a lie. I dont think I can let go though...

hockeychick8792
03-21-2007, 07:18 PM
lol I don't think any one could let go it is humanly impossible. But the poem is on an emotional subject that could put a few heart strings.

.:Shadow:.
03-23-2007, 09:23 AM
Thanks.
You're brobably right.

shadowy girl
03-29-2007, 10:12 AM
I really enjoyed it too... you are talented..indeed...
and ya,, you did not write anything for 4 months!!!
I write evry night, you really shoul give your writting more time...