cloda
03-21-2007, 04:54 PM
My first....comments plz
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Look into my brown eyes...did you notice they were
brown at all..?
Do you care about my feelings do you try to catch me when I fall..?
Do I have your attention do I have your respect..?
When you act this way do you notice the effect..?
Your playing around with my inner thoughts...misreading my emotions..,
I'm easy enough to please wit honesty and devotions...
When I'm hurting so deeply....obviously so clear,
Then how come it is not you who wipes away my tear..?
we're still young...still learning things anew..,
So why is all this pain caused by you..?
I need a distraction to grab my attention..,
so maybe all this frustration will have a prevention...
I'm exhausted from sleepless nights from endless black dreams..,
The world of maturity to the young is not all it seems...
Pressures...tears...smiles...feeli
ngs of wanting something out of reach...,
I cant take the never ending days there's rules I'm gonna have to breach...
If some thing's wrong and you cant notice I'm not OK...
Then can I ask....what do you expect me to say...??
-------------------------------------------------------
Look into my brown eyes...did you notice they were
brown at all..?
Do you care about my feelings do you try to catch me when I fall..?
Do I have your attention do I have your respect..?
When you act this way do you notice the effect..?
Your playing around with my inner thoughts...misreading my emotions..,
I'm easy enough to please wit honesty and devotions...
When I'm hurting so deeply....obviously so clear,
Then how come it is not you who wipes away my tear..?
we're still young...still learning things anew..,
So why is all this pain caused by you..?
I need a distraction to grab my attention..,
so maybe all this frustration will have a prevention...
I'm exhausted from sleepless nights from endless black dreams..,
The world of maturity to the young is not all it seems...
Pressures...tears...smiles...feeli
ngs of wanting something out of reach...,
I cant take the never ending days there's rules I'm gonna have to breach...
If some thing's wrong and you cant notice I'm not OK...
Then can I ask....what do you expect me to say...??