Pencil Sage

[Jasper88]

Pencil in my hand,
so beautifully tanned

Tell me your secrets,
let me know it's okay

Allow me to say
my deepest feelings in a way
where they live on,
unscarred by a bomb,
unafraid of the hating man,
always ready to damn.

Pencil in my hand,
tell me your secrets.

[den]

Hee hee, I have a favourite pen!

[atiguhya padma]

Den,

I really liked your last haiku.

Oh and could you please clean out your inbox!

AP:)

[den]

Heh, okays, done! ;)

:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o <----- I was asleep, and dreaming about why nobody writes anymore, d'oh!

[Suetang]

I'm sure many people could relate to your words, I know I could.

Take care..........Sue

[Isagel]

I really like the titel and the opening lines :

"Pencil in my hand,
so beautifully tanned

Tell me your secrets,
let me know it's okay"

It gives the image of the pen as something alive, and the act of writing as an act of magic.

[amuse]

Originally posted by Jasper88
Allow me to say
my deepest feelings in a way
where they live on,
unscarred by a bomb,
unafraid of the hating man,
always ready to damn.
...
tell me your secrets.
i liked these lines.

[Avalive]

A cute poem. Nice inspiration.