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verybaddmom
03-10-2004, 02:56 PM
I looked; I saw three of my coats
Draped across chairs,
I smiled and thought of you.

I’m wearing my sexy “longshoreman’s” toque too
(with my bathrobe).
And so I think of you.

Photo’s everywhere.
I love to think of you.

I see the light from my Ikea desk lamp
It shimmers silver from your dog-tags,
Draped about me like polished arms.

Hmmm…Arms….

Koa
03-10-2004, 04:27 PM
How I love it when in poems there are all these concrte references to the real world... Lol, even Ikea! (isn't it considered advertisement? ;))

thanksgiving
03-10-2004, 11:44 PM
it is really a cozy and vivid picture. it reminds us of many similar scenes in the films.