against PC (the word!)

[Pete J W-Mears]

the word

dont say that rude thing again-
you emit such grotesque sound
a sound you say you cannot play
for fear what it may arouse
yet why in this world of freedom such
we live within parameters yet fear discust
"dont say jehova" how we laugh these days
oh the future will laugh at its arse.
at the fooliry of foreberes,
upon ways you seldom beleive
with a philosphy stuck in the past

to fear nothing more than sound
and fire hatred upon its action
your no worse than the fool with verse,
blatent snobbery upon poor education
aid and solve an less smart mouthed
how idiotic in our discust.
stop this obsessive behaviour,
strive for enlightenment we must

[genoveva]

I find the topic of your poem very interesting, but I would encourage you to re-write the poem. Focus on being less cryptic. Also, check your spelling errors. I'd look forward to reading a revision...

[Pete J W-Mears]

indeed my spelling is a mess lol i tend to scribble get the point fourth and "publish" without thought

i shall do as you ask and update this peice asap

cheers