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blp
03-09-2007, 01:48 PM
Two runners ran
in opposite directions
on a quiet street

Two runners running
in differing directions
on opposing sides
of a quiet street

I was facing one and
the other had his back to me
as to the other’s back, and I passed them both
going in the latter’s direction
There was no third direction
for me to cycle in

white camellia
03-09-2007, 02:07 PM
This one sounds like a poetic narration of a mathematical problem, maybe something related to linear algebra--never knew math could be this pretty.

Adolescent09
03-09-2007, 06:27 PM
I liked your last poem better, but this is unique and great still. Nice going, blp :D