Vada Dagon
03-09-2007, 11:12 AM
Hey Folks,
I have a couple of poems that were inspired during a vacation to a Mediterranean Island. Anyway, they were originally written in Spanish so the translation may have lost something but post opinions away.
Winds
Extinguished winds
over dampened lights
among the sounds of rocks.
Below the water
flowing rich sound
hidden in the air
from the Sea.
Melodies
Songs from the Sea
Melodies of the Ocean
Arias from the Shore
Operas of the Bay
Concertos from the Reef
Bring stillness to be Grief
Let me know what you think or feel. I certainly enjoyed while I was writing them, but then again it was a beautiful place.
I have a couple of poems that were inspired during a vacation to a Mediterranean Island. Anyway, they were originally written in Spanish so the translation may have lost something but post opinions away.
Winds
Extinguished winds
over dampened lights
among the sounds of rocks.
Below the water
flowing rich sound
hidden in the air
from the Sea.
Melodies
Songs from the Sea
Melodies of the Ocean
Arias from the Shore
Operas of the Bay
Concertos from the Reef
Bring stillness to be Grief
Let me know what you think or feel. I certainly enjoyed while I was writing them, but then again it was a beautiful place.