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malikm24
03-04-2004, 05:19 AM
To write for the hands will,
to write for the heart commands,
to write for I need to
and not just
because I want to,
to move my hands
because a force moves them,
to go on
because I have the energy to,
to live
because life was meant to,
to sing
because words wont be stifled, to dance
because the feet wont stand still, to speak
because the voice beckons,
to love
because its so beautiful,
to be,
because its so good to.

bbq13
03-05-2004, 07:35 AM
this is great... i like it... kinda reminds me of all the great things life has to offer... i liked the first part most... i just feel like i can totally relate to it...

To write for the hands will,
to write for the heart commands,
to write for I need to
and not just
because I want to,
to move my hands
because a force moves them,
to go on
because I have the energy to,
to live
because life was meant to,
to sing
because words wont be stifled...

malikm24
03-05-2004, 09:19 AM
Thanks for the comments,bbq13,appreciate the same

psycojones
03-06-2004, 12:14 AM
as bbq13 said, it is very easy to relate to. good stuff, i like it.