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TwiztidKarma
02-28-2007, 02:19 AM
Last day's seem so far, But yet come so quick,
I should know,
I smoke em' away with the flick of my bic,
But still remains, The thought of what I f***ing am,
I wish to feel, But dead I am ,
Maybe only a few could understand,
When I think I found em',
Life seems to make chance, A long awaited dance,

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Word's become rare,
And thoughts always constantly blare,
But yet another thought , Whose to care?

Suicide' O'h ' Suicide' ,
Where art' thou,

But with mother moon and you so beautiful ,
How Could I be so stupid as to throw it all away?
I've cherished the pain until it became meaningful,
Am I now a devil? I do have a chain around my ankel,
My wings are broken, So no im not an angel,

But to die would be to deny pain and beautiful misery,
And I cant deny, It's no mystery,
I live to only wish you see happiness,
It's just a shame, As I have to sit back and let it all pass,
Shifting like sand in an hourglass,
The chance not so far away,
As I could really touch out and caress,
But if we could be, That would be lucky,
On the inside I'm so f***ing ugly,
Just a caught thought, Just a rumor,
Cuddle with me and find humor in me,
Feelings are emotions, To become like Atlantis,
Sunken so far amiss, It's hard for you to find this,

But then I see you kiss,
And the happiness that twists upon your lips,
Inside pain lashes at me, With beautiful whips,
Heart begins to grip,
Oh' how much more can it rip?

Hey' What a lovely beautiful night on this dark night strip.

dramasnot6
02-28-2007, 06:25 AM
your imagery and use of language ans voice is so raw and strong. i am guessing its about unrequited love?

My fav parts:


It's just a shame, As I have to sit back and let it all pass,
Shifting like sand in an hourglass,

And the happiness that twists upon your lips,
Inside pain lashes at me, With beautiful whips,
Heart begins to grip,
Oh' how much more can it rip?