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FromTheHeart
02-26-2007, 02:01 PM
Sitting alone in your room
And the tears filling your eyes
Darkness has surrounded you
And the sun doesn't seem to rise
The black clouds start to thunder
And Fear starts to shake your heart
You look around but you can't see
And your courage begins to fly away
Doubt has taken over your mind
And disturbance begins to crawl through your thoughts
You shout but you’re the only one who can hear
And Sadness captures your breath
The loud sound of thunders come again
Then you close your ears
The lightning continue its strikes
So you close your eyes
The winds open the window
And you began to quake
………
Then you open your eyes slightly
And you sight a small spot of light coming through the opened window
Directed right at your heart
You put your hands on your chest trying to catch?? it with your fingers
And from a small point in your shaking heart
You feel courage growing up
Your heart turns into a battlefield
Hope fights the fear, and courage the weakness
You look to see where this spot of light is coming from
Then you notice that the moon was the source
And you realize,
Among all these massive clouds, the black darkness, and the stormy winds
There was always a moon lighting your darkness
But the fear and desperateness blinded your eyes from its light
And blinded your heart from the hope
………
The strength grabs your legs then you stand up

You stand up
And the darkness has been vanished from the space
You stand up
And the hope has been took over the place
You stand up
And take another look at your life
You stand up
And you know that you will survive

You know that your fears and desperateness are not going to last
And you know that they are now just a past.

FromTheHeart
02-27-2007, 10:57 AM
come on guys, I want to hear something from you.

dramasnot6
02-28-2007, 06:29 AM
it is quite the inspirational piece. it covers a lot of themes though, you may want to make the messages a bit more coherent.