brokenheartpoet
02-25-2007, 06:23 PM
I am still new to writing poetry I thank all of you who gave me comments I come asking for more to improve . Please do not hold back I am asking for an honest answer and ways to become better in poetry writing. I wrote this poem in mid-Janurary Here it is : Cancer touches all of us Young and old We've been touched by cancer Either people who was affected by it So, why can we not do something Cancer has a cure it called Love They haven't found a cure but love has to be a cure Love is a cure Staying with love ones when get sicker or are well If you could bottle unconditional love So, as long as we love then we will find a cure for cancer