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azsidd80s
02-24-2007, 01:46 PM
Can art (music & painting) change the quality of life or the government needs to spend money elsewhere?


CHANGING LIVES OF PEOPLE

Arts have a great impact on people lives but the government needs to spend money on other sectors instead of focusing on arts. In this essay we will discuss that how people can improve the quality of their lives & how the government could help in making people livings better.

Many people are interested in different type of arts. Some listen to the music, while some prefer painting. Indeed getting involved in art make standard of living better as it refreshes ones mind & help us generate new ideas. Painting is one of the examples that we could refer to. There are many paintings that are soft & the theme is so great that by viewing at these types of paintings we generate new ideas on how to change our lives & make it better.

On the contrary, there are people who are living below the standards. The government needs to think about them, how their living standards could be raised. Governments could help them by raising educational institutes where the education is free of cost for children belonging to poor families. Another initiative that the government can take is by putting up industries so that people could get good opportunities.

In conclusion, the living standards of people need to be balanced. This could only be done if the governments raise funds to help the needful.