The Office

[dramasnot6]

finished this in a mega-inspired 10 minutes,hopefully this gives a nice rawness to it
I welcome and appreciate any constructive criticism you have to offer

The desk rumbled with famish
Fingers rapidly caressing the flesh-stained keyboard
Glare of the screen screaming back in a pixilated passion
The Libidinous rumblings of a 9-5 inescape
Button up blouses pressed up against the shredded paint
Placed on each desk, a four corner reminder of the wife and kids
The taste of wood remains from rows of chewed up pencils
And I photocopy souls
With
A jammed up printer

Carpool of sharks
A fanged briefcase,
Radioactive loafers
Corporate curses chanted as he walks the punctilio plank
Tempestuous bureaucracy swallowing every
Last drop.
Poisoned by my own ideas
Each tainted with
Splashes of malice

Shipwrecks and treasure hunting
Electricity in the air
Surging bolts of eel-like efficiency

Sea of cubicles
Crowned with the mass-desired Office door
Currently Engraved-
“Village Idiot”

[Schokokeks]

Nice poem, Drama ! :nod:
I especially like those lines:

Placed on each desk, a four corner reminder of the wife and kids
The taste of wood remains from rows of chewed up pencils
And I photocopy souls
With
A jammed up printer
Somebody has a very colourful imagination and an eye for details :).

[Pensive]

Nice poem, Drama ! :nod:
I especially like those lines:

Somebody has a very colourful imagination and an eye for details :).

I agree. This is really very nice. :) I have liked your description a lot, dramasnot6! It is very beautiful.

[dramasnot6]

Thank ye kindly cookie and pensive! :D