Just a start

[Waendoliel]

I am quite new her, so I am just trying this out.
Anyway, feel free to comment on my poem below:


Dangerous mind

I awake from a dream,
my body is tender.
I feel my soul stirs,
all senses surrender.

I awake from a dream,
stuck on a releasing idea;
to challenge my destiny
And see the future to be.

I am high on a thought
to take a step ahead,
and look for happiness
after I am dead.