PDA

View Full Version : Whispers Upon The Wind



JackShea
02-13-2007, 01:18 PM
The Arid Days
Like Dry Words
Spoken When I Was Young
Are Now But Whispers Upon
The Wind.
Spoken In
Anonymity.
I Share,
And They?
They Care.

07loneil
02-13-2007, 06:47 PM
This is cool. Its haunting, in a good way. Its very good! You really set a tone and communicated the message very well. I has a unique format! I really like it! I like how it talks about people's past, and it has a nice sound to it.