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Rayjon
02-09-2007, 02:17 AM
Falling Flesh

Life’s breathe buried beneath the mud
Love drowned to hate in a sea of blood

Our hope our care dry bones laid bare
What sort of fool laid his head there?

One lone blue bead flung through space
A crimson tear upon God’s face

The Earth is now our falling nest
Our flesh so miserably failed the test

And some hearts wonder what of the rest
Those that have yet to leave the breast

dramasnot6
02-10-2007, 07:31 AM
I LOVE it. Your description and flow is amazing
My fav:
One lone blue bead flung through space
wow....