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07loneil
02-04-2007, 01:39 AM
SUMMER RAIN
A drop falls slowly
More drops follow, making a
Sweet, shimmering song.

SUMMER SUN
The warm sun looked down
Beaming on the cheery earth
Warming the calm earth

07loneil
02-04-2007, 01:44 AM
When I first wrote this, it was a song. I left out the refrain when I rewrote it as a poem. its about losing a friend...
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I guess its been many years
it feels not long ago
we promised to be best friends
in the suns gentle glow

we were little then
the world was our friend
we thought we'd be friends to the end
i guess we didn't know

not long later we said goodbye
we said we'd keep in touch
i didn't hear from her alot
but i missed her so much

if only it had stopped right there
the hurt might have started to dull
but we moved and who did i meet
but her.
Believe i didn't dare

I thought I'd have my friend back,
but she stabbed me in the heart
do I look happy to you
cause inside im broken apart

but I see her face every day
and somewhere in my heart
i'll cherish those sunkissed days
nomatter what. Forever

07loneil
02-04-2007, 01:49 AM
I stand alone in a crowd of friends
the calm in stormy waters
untouched by joys and fears of them
what am i missing

maybe im better off like this
maybe there's something I missed
Alone

I stand alone on the sidelines
life passes by
hold in my secrets not knowing why
what am i missing

maybe im better off like this
maybe there's something I missed
Alone

dramasnot6
02-04-2007, 05:00 AM
The summer rain one was sweet, i liked the "shimmering song"

Madhuri
02-04-2007, 06:05 AM
I stand alone on the sidelines
life passes by
hold in my secrets not knowing why
what am i missing


Me too, even I dont know why we keep secrets. Maybe, we think that when everything will be alright, we dont need to keep it a secret anymore, we are just holding on until all is okay, but it sometimes never gets alright and it forever remains a secret. I think the 'getting alright' is what we miss. :)

Logos
02-04-2007, 06:07 AM
Poems merged to one topic, please see this post :)
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=21394

07loneil
02-09-2007, 06:04 PM
Yeah, madhuri, it is interesting that we keep secrets, I do it all the time, but it doesn't help.