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Suetang
02-17-2004, 10:00 PM
I search the far horizons
As far as the eye can see
Upon waves of deep desire
You come sailing towards me

You throw to me a lifeline
And I move closer to you
As the seabirds fly above us
And the sun fades from our view

Safe and warm in love's embrace
I kiss you softly on the mouth
Divine sensations are experienced
As they move from north to south

Beneath a galaxy of stars
Our two hearts sing in tune
As love holds centre stage
Beneath the harvest moon

Sail deep inside my heart
Your premanent port of call
Drop anchor in my soul
Into love I now fall

Ravenwolfvoyage
02-17-2004, 10:49 PM
That is a captivating write Sue, you capture the true essence of a hearts calling. Thank you for sharing!!

Helga
03-12-2004, 08:49 PM
that was great, I loved it

psycojones
03-14-2004, 02:41 PM
beautiful

angel
03-23-2004, 08:34 AM
Its goood :)

avid_reader
03-23-2004, 09:14 AM
i could feel it in my heart !! good one Sue


Divine sensations are experienced
As they move from north to south


werent these 2 lines a bit out of tune ?
did you mean ..

Divine sensations we experience
As we move from north to south


?

Suetang
03-23-2004, 11:45 PM
Thank you all for your lovely comments.

avid reader - sorry you thought the lines were a bit out of tune, it was written as I meant it to be.

Take care.........Sue