hey big guy

[blp]

It's all farts or trumpet blasts I
can't tell which, but

spelling mistakes and all
wiping ricicles of ordure and
suppuration
from chapped, indignant lips
a one man industry for telling it like it izn't,
spelling mistakes and all,
tough paeans to
torture, bullying, war and hate
And odes to sweet liqueur and love
Muttering, to paraphrase Uccello,
Fulmination is a sweet thing!
('perspective' being the thing left out)
In the monitor glow
Late
And too bad if the object of that love
like Uccello's doesn't get much of a look in
He huffs it off:
Honour

is on

my side

[white camellia]

Me, again. :)

Just a few personal thoughts...

This is a fresh mix of writing and painting, one of the most sparkling ones of yours that I like.

'Perspective'(interpreted differently in the two contexts)is something that is both used in literature stuff and his style of fine art, to form a description which adheres to the reality. It's only that perspective of the latter is what naked eyes can see(but how about 'concrete poetry'?). And the two scopes of art share the themes, relief of human torture, horrors, satires, truth, beauty, etc.

Preciseness, is not the privilege of scientists.

Be a real artist,

Honour's

on

your side!

[Virgil]

Very good blp. I happen to like it. I wonder who you are referring to? ;) Emotion does sometimes bring out the best in our writing. Perhaps you should post it at that other place. I'm sure they would get a kick out of it.

[blp]

Me, again. :)

Honour's

on

your side!

Thanks - though perhaps honour's over-rated!

Perspective in art is, of course, not just a way of depicting reality, but a trick. The whole subject's tricky.