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thefemalemind
01-15-2007, 02:09 AM
Behind this smile,
So bittersweet,
Lies a deep
Agony,
Devouring me.
Behind these eyes
So bright,
Lie tears
Of sorrow,
Drowning me.
Behind this smile
So convincing,
Lies a fiery pain,
Scorching me.
Behind this façade,
That has overpowered you,
Lies me,
Slowly
Disintegrating.

Dr Eep
01-15-2007, 10:15 AM
Behind this smile,
So bittersweet,
Lies a deep
Agony,
Devouring me.
Behind these eyes
So bright,
Lie tears
Of sorrow,
Drowning me.
Behind this smile
So convincing,
Lies a fiery pain,
Scorching me.
Behind this façade,
That has overpowered you,
Lies me,
Slowly
Disintegrating.

This is so heartfelt and captures so much pain and emotion. I'm truly sorry about your loss:bawling:

God bless!!

Pendragon
01-15-2007, 01:40 PM
A beautiful and deeply moving eulogy. My prayers and sympathy. Pen.

GimmyDiamond
01-16-2007, 10:56 PM
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