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Louie
01-07-2007, 06:47 AM
Visions of her smile
follows down stream
tiny feet break
into night that never ends

and remembrance laced
in woods silent that stare
her memory embraced
in flowers everywhere

dramasnot6
01-07-2007, 08:46 AM
short and sweet :) Very lovely, especially the second stanza. :thumbs_up

Poetess
01-07-2007, 10:51 AM
The title is impressive as well.
(Yes, i`m often attracted to the title)

Triskele
01-07-2007, 04:28 PM
i like it... nice, kind of a quiet appreciation of beauty

Anna G. Appel
01-07-2007, 11:19 PM
Your writing style is somewhat alike to my own.
I like this alot.