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Arania
01-07-2007, 12:20 AM
Okay, this is really dumb, I know. But itīs about a person whom Iīve grown close to this year. We used to just hate each other. Itīs kind of a realization piece. Please tell me what you think. Itīs very .... different. Be honest.

Look at my soul.
Touch me.
Please do something.

I'm too warm
for someone like you
and your

Sweet intoxication
From a vintage wine called
Wonder.

I'm breathing far too well
The dense air
That existed... maybe tomorrow
Or the next day.

Triskele
01-07-2007, 04:29 PM
i hear you, it has happened to me before, nice conveyance of emotion, it touched me...

Arania
01-08-2007, 01:06 AM
I´m glad. That´s what poetry´s for, isn´t it?

Arania
01-09-2007, 01:09 AM
silhouettes


there are brown
silhouettes,

bare, and whisping

left untouched
in a crevice of self
somewhere.

you should know they exist
for you --

they are starved for you.

Triskele
01-10-2007, 09:00 PM
i like the imagery of a brown silhouette... nice job and keep up the excellent poems...

Arania
01-12-2007, 01:00 AM
Thank you. You don't realize how much that means to me. It is very encouraging.


concealment in faux wigs



cultivate,
extrapolate
communicate to me
from the depths
of your warm
sided ringlets
that hang so
preposterously
around the face
of concealed futures.

there are dreams hidden in the curls of your hair
and I think you can feel them.