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WolfLarsen
01-05-2007, 04:13 AM
A Baby is an Old Man in a Second


I write my poems with your flesh oozing and dancing out of my pen, suddenly everybody's pregnant and there are thousands of buildings sprouting out of the walls in your living room and your girlfriend's tummy begins growing like a monologue, suddenly poems start shooting out of every floating molecule and poems are floating out of every animal and every plant and every person because everything on the earth is festering with poetry, you begin kissing all the lines of poetry until you are a circle, everyone is mailing you their own personal sky, so you're driving alongside the Mekong in Laos in a motorcycle and the people stare with thousands of eyes crawling all over your white skin forever, and if you think nuclear war can never happen sit at that gray pond in Treblinka – everything horrible can happen.

Copyright 2004 by Wolf Larsen

(First published in Kritya literary magazine, India)

SleepyWitch
01-05-2007, 07:30 AM
... and if you think nuclear war can never happen sit at that gray pond in Treblinka – everything horrible can happen.

Copyright 2004 by Wolf Larsen

(First published in Kritya literary magazine, India)

oh dear Wolf, I'm so glad you're back once more :) I've missed bashing you so much :) :) :)
actually, I like these lines!!! I'd like them even more, if the other lines they are attached to didn't say the same as all your other works

suddenly everybody's pregnant and there are thousands of buildings sprouting out of the walls in your living room and your girlfriend's tummy begins growing like a monologue, suddenly poems start shooting out of every floating molecule and poems are floating out of every animal and every plant and every person
pregnant tummies, monologues, poems start shooting out of peoples' pens/penises/*insert a noun of your choice*
It's always the same. As long as people read only one of your pieces, it's OK.
But what if you published all of them in one volume? It would be the same all over again.
Why not shoot out lots of poems rather than talking about poems shooting out of places all the time?
On a brighter note: your poems give me hope. If you managed to get those published, chances are I'll find someone willing to print my stories :) :D