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[Zypher Wolfe]

Hi, here's a poem I recently wrote and would like feedabck. Honest opinions will do nicely, as always.

-Dearly Beloved-

You're more than beautiful
More spectacular than special

Never under estimate yourself
unless you want to be proven wrong
afterall look at the people who did
and look at the high hurdles you've bounded through

It was your will that brought you here
Your dreams that keep you going
To sing the greatest of songs
And act the most memorable scenes
Not to mention you yourself
would write them too

You say you like someone
You blush when he pops into your head
Happiness washes over you in gentle waves
And inside you say, countless butterflies take flight

Waiting for a prince
to have you in his heart
for you to have him be a part of your world
and he himself makes it a whole new one

you think you talk too much
but your voice is welcomed in these ears
you think you're stupid when you act on your feelings
But I think you're quite intuitive, far beyond your years

You see something in me
You describe it in hopes that I,
can see myself through your eyes

In doing so you show me something I've never known
And its the fact that who I am
Is capable of having a love so dear
a love that I can finally call
my own - Greg Padilla

and thank you in advance for your feedback.