King Lear

[Andy3003]

Hi all,

I have recently finished a essay on 'King Lear'. Would anyone be prepared to take a look at it and give me a few areas of critique?

I know it has been mentioned that a few people on here teach/or want to teach 'King Lear'. It really would be appreciated if someone could just spend 10 minutes giving me a bit of help and advice.

I'm really keen to study English at university, so the more help I can get with my writing the better.

Thanks in advance.
Andrew

[Redzeppelin]

I'll have a look. Where would I find the essay?

[dyingflame]

I would have a look. Send it on [email protected] mark it clearly as King Lear Essay as otherwise it will automatically be thrown with the rest of the spam

[Andy3003]

Email sent - thankyou.

[dyingflame]

is everything contained within part of the same essay? because even after it seems to be complete there are sort of disjointed ideas that repeat the actual content of the coherent essay.
i think you did a good job, apart what I told you on msn, you can consider it complete- IMO

[Andy3003]

Yer the ideas at the end are just ideas and edited drafs....

As you will notice I did specifically entitle that sections ROUGH -implying notes on just ideas.

Thanks for the help anyway.

[killa4120]

yo dude i wud like 2 see essay email me it [email protected]:D

[dyingflame]

shaquille thompson <[email protected]> to me
show details 26-Apr (2 days ago)

Yo dudes can u send me dat essay da dude sent u I need help bad…plz….cuz its
due 2morrow…so can ya?




great try man I just saw your email which made me retch, I wouldn't have sent you Andy's essay anyway, why don't you try to do your own work for once? Andy I hope you did not send him your essay he merely wants to rip your hard work off