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tuncay_87
12-31-2006, 12:28 AM
Behind the Shooting Star

last night I've been lost in thoughts again
I burned with longing again
I asked the shining stars above about you
looking at all the stars I thought about you
never stop thinking about you
and at that moment a star has fallen
don't they say what you want happens
I would like so much you to be with me at that moment
to be together
my hand in your hands, my eyes in your eyes
but none of these happened
the only real thing is to burn with your passion
crying with your longing has happened
behind that shooting star

Turk
12-31-2006, 02:58 AM
Maybe you should try writing poems in Turkish. As i see your English is not enough to write a good poem.