Neo_Sephiroth
12-30-2006, 03:38 PM
This is just a little something I came up with while doing assignments on plays and whatnot...I guess it somewhat caught my interest since I came up with this.
The characters (For now, at least):
Maria (Nice chick...sometimes)
Carl (Neat freak!)
Soon (Disgusting dude)
Once upon a time, in a crazy world, there were three friends of the strangest kind. Maria, the "lady" of the group, was the nicest of nice. She was kind, sweet, and generous...supposedly. She is waiting on some friends in the library...
Maria: (Sigh) Where the hell are those guys? They were suppose to be here hours ago. Stupid jerks. That idiot Carl is probably cleaning his vacuum cleaner. What an idiot. And Soon is probably eating his own crap or something. Argh!!! (Getting angry) I'm going to kill those guys!!!
(Voices from the library says "Shoosh, fool!!!)
(Enter Soon)
Soon: (Walks in and approaches Maria) Damn, Maria. Keep your cool. Sheesh...Why you so angry?
Maria: Why am I angry? What the hell is wrong with you!? You're late you idiot!!!
(Again, voices from the library says "Can't you understand, 'shoose'!?)
Maria: Argh!!! Shut up!!! (Sees that Soon is carrying a bag) Huh...? What do you have there? (Points to the bag)
Soon: Huh? This? Oh, these are just some...uh... brownies...uh...in case we get hungry.
Maria: (Gives Soon a curious look) Hmm...You're planning something...
(Enter Carl)
Carl: Well, hello there, mates! Sorry I'm late...cleaning the vacuum wasn't as easy as I thought it would be. But I'm here now. So, what will we be doing today? Nothing dirty I hope.
Soon: Dirty? (Being sarcastic) Of course not. In fact, we'll be taking it easy, have some fun, and maybe even a little hop-scotch!
Maria: Hey, you two!!! Shut up!!!
Soon & Carl: What?
Maria: Listen...You hear that?
(Complete silence)
Soon & Carl: Hear what?
Maria: Exactly...Nothing. Where is everbody?
Soon: Whoa...this place is completely empty.
Carl: Hmm...? How 'bout we see what's going on outside, eh?
...And so the three friends step outside of the library. To their surprise, they find themselves in a strange and freaky place.
So, what do you folks think? I'm not sure, but I might add on more and continue the story...I already have the next few chapters in head anyway...
I think I call this chapter 1...Or maybe act one...Hmm...Or maybe...Get something to eat...
The characters (For now, at least):
Maria (Nice chick...sometimes)
Carl (Neat freak!)
Soon (Disgusting dude)
Once upon a time, in a crazy world, there were three friends of the strangest kind. Maria, the "lady" of the group, was the nicest of nice. She was kind, sweet, and generous...supposedly. She is waiting on some friends in the library...
Maria: (Sigh) Where the hell are those guys? They were suppose to be here hours ago. Stupid jerks. That idiot Carl is probably cleaning his vacuum cleaner. What an idiot. And Soon is probably eating his own crap or something. Argh!!! (Getting angry) I'm going to kill those guys!!!
(Voices from the library says "Shoosh, fool!!!)
(Enter Soon)
Soon: (Walks in and approaches Maria) Damn, Maria. Keep your cool. Sheesh...Why you so angry?
Maria: Why am I angry? What the hell is wrong with you!? You're late you idiot!!!
(Again, voices from the library says "Can't you understand, 'shoose'!?)
Maria: Argh!!! Shut up!!! (Sees that Soon is carrying a bag) Huh...? What do you have there? (Points to the bag)
Soon: Huh? This? Oh, these are just some...uh... brownies...uh...in case we get hungry.
Maria: (Gives Soon a curious look) Hmm...You're planning something...
(Enter Carl)
Carl: Well, hello there, mates! Sorry I'm late...cleaning the vacuum wasn't as easy as I thought it would be. But I'm here now. So, what will we be doing today? Nothing dirty I hope.
Soon: Dirty? (Being sarcastic) Of course not. In fact, we'll be taking it easy, have some fun, and maybe even a little hop-scotch!
Maria: Hey, you two!!! Shut up!!!
Soon & Carl: What?
Maria: Listen...You hear that?
(Complete silence)
Soon & Carl: Hear what?
Maria: Exactly...Nothing. Where is everbody?
Soon: Whoa...this place is completely empty.
Carl: Hmm...? How 'bout we see what's going on outside, eh?
...And so the three friends step outside of the library. To their surprise, they find themselves in a strange and freaky place.
So, what do you folks think? I'm not sure, but I might add on more and continue the story...I already have the next few chapters in head anyway...
I think I call this chapter 1...Or maybe act one...Hmm...Or maybe...Get something to eat...