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tuncay_87
12-28-2006, 05:09 PM
let your moonlike beautiful eyes
shine inside me like stars
I wished you from destiny secretly
I extended my arms, you wanted to hold silently
I dreamt a dream, I thought it was you, I woke up quietly

I missed you, my hands, my eyes
the time has come for these words
if I extend my hands will you hold them silently
I dreamt a dream my love, I thought it was you quietly

when you cry your teardrops fall on my heart
when I remain a star sorrow falls on my eyes
my love hasn't noticed your eyes, your love is in my heart
when your hands touch and erase my teardrops
winds dry up my cheeks, a sigh falls inside me

Adolescent09
12-28-2006, 08:05 PM
I can truthfully say I liked it. Personally I think its better than any poetry I've ever written. Its far more clearer and less pretentious than my stuff.