Behind the Horizon

[Poetess]

Behind The Horizon

Comes to enlighten our days
In a journey from East to West.
Wakes people in a silent way
In a morrow`s light from the chest.
Curses us, afternoon, then leaves
In a night`s mission to meet the beloved
Behind the horizon.

Sun and the beloved, Lap of Sea meet
--In a peaceful shift with the moon--
Oh! Thou lonely moon in the skies, beat
Us with love instead of countless hours of doom.
Leave the lit-up planet in eternal date
With the beloved Lap of Sea
Behind the horizon.

I wonder if there were no Sun
In a planet like our Mother Earth.
There would be no pain but fun,
Everyperson in love, and loved with mirth.
Under the shiny star, and dark blue sky
Staring at the lea, with hugs that never flee
Before the horizon.



I don`t like daytime.
This piece of my work talks about the Sun. When I was young, I used to think Sun sinks in seas at sunset time.
The Sun goes to meet its beloved (Lap of the sea) and switches turns the the Moon. So, I ask the moon to always stay in the sky, providing us with love moments, peace, and mirth..

[Triskele]

i am with ya here, i tend to think of the moon as more peaceful, loving, accepting, and the stark light of the sun to be bit harsh and insincere. poem was excellent.

[Poetess]

Thank you so much!
I really do have a low self-confidence about my writings

[Dark_Fire]

i like it a lot... nice job

[Poetess]

thank you


 

[Triskele]

but... how could we ever go on without the occasional sunburst of stingingly blinding truth, the moon is more comfortable, but could we live without the sun?

[Poetess]

Because you are wonted to the Sun, you are asking this question.
At the beginning of this piece, I described my point of view/opinion indirectly about the sun.
Then, I supposed if it never existed, what would happen?
I guess, and thanks to technology in somecases, we might still be able to see things clearly :=

[Triskele]

really more of a philosophical question than a literal query, i wonder if we could really live in a mental place where all bad things are tucked safely out of the moonlight, could our inquisitive minds live with these questions unanswered?

[ghideon]

night reminds
times feared
night time
losses quite dear


dark
night sky
presence
cold frigid frozen ice
essence

mistaken
run from night
and huddle in the corner
and count to 100
again
and
again
wishing
and praying
that this night would
end

That is not what I do

yes yes yes
danger
goosebumps
and shivers

midnight
delivers
star light
glows

lost and tossed and thrown away and broken.
I have awoken
Slap bite
mefreeze
or burn..



blood and through piss
I have learned many truths
that in
daylight
I can easily dismiss.

:alien:

I would love any comments, praise, critiques...writing is alone act....any voice in vastness.... desired.

not a poet
but a man
who writes
poems

[dramasnot6]

very effective and lovely use of symbols in nature poetess

[Triskele]

personally, i like it

[Poetess]

very effective and lovely use of symbols in nature poetess

Call me Waph :p