My Destiny

[Helga]

Sometimes I feel
like demons sit on my shoulders,
sometimes I feel
like they lay on my heart.
Sometimes I think
they stand there to scare me,
scare me and make me
fall apart.
My demons watch
my every move.
Sometimes they make me
feel like a fool.
I've prayed for an angel
to sit on my shoulders,
I've prayed for an angel
to lay on my heart.
I keep on praying
for angels to save me,
while demons tear me apart.

[sloegin]

Demons need love too.

[Koa]

Simple and nice :)

[Dyrwen]

I liked the form it was written in, the way you broke up the rhyme-lines. Good simple message but of course, also well placed imagery.

[SmilesAF]

That's pretty good! I like it.

[Suetang]

Your words chilled me to the bone and if this is about you I can only hope you find the strength to rise above. I hope your writing brings you comfort.

Take care

Sue

[Ravenwolfvoyage]

I very much enjoyed this write Helga. You have an obvious talent for pulling it all together and portraying the divion we face externally and internally within ourselves. Excellent!!!