6 ft under now I'm over you

[Lilly]

And the blood has all stopped flowing,
No beat in my broken heart,
No you know you can't save something
That was dead right from the start.
You tore my life to pieces,
You used me and cast me aside,
And now the charm and grace I fell for,
Are the things I can't abide.
You struck a deal with the devil,
Signed you name on the dotted line.
Total disregard for the lives you wasted
Only wicked thoughts run through your mind.
You shattered my heart, which I had willingly gave,
Because you own was so hardened and cold.
And there's nothing of you left, nothing to save,
I'll cry at your funeral but dance on your grave.

--Bit on the angry side but hey!

[mir]

Sounds like a song! :D i like it!

[Misscaroline]

That's awesome. Great rhythm, and besides a few typos, I think it's amazing. Was there any inspiration for this, or just because? (You don't have to tell- but I sometimes find that some of my angriest poetry comes from the air itself. Nothing brought it on, yet there it is...) It's wonderful all the same. Love to see you around more often.

[Lilly]

Thanks actually it wasn't inspired by anything really!

I just have inner rage sometimes :)

Thanks for you comments!