poem perhaps

[Triskele]

heya,
anyone, i would love some critique/positive criticisms etc. i am a fairly new poet and any suggestions are needed.

Stranger

Eons dance the millennial whisper of time
Flickers and flutters of ragged black shadows
The tatters of a midnight cloak lilting
Ancient strangers glide through electric lights
Glint of the curious sparks their eye
Proverbial pipers dance to the tune
The wailing call, the walking man

-Triskele-

[mir]

That's very good, Triskele!!

You write lovely phrases and images. . . :)