never there....

[spally]

with a rose he calls her name
with a river she drowned her pain
in the moon light he looksfor her face
tears masked by a cloudless rain
watching him walk away
never did see her face
never did she drown her pain
moon light never reveal her to him
sudden rain to mask tears that never fell
and he knew that she was crying
upon her grave he left the rose
and cried with her in the rain


note: not completely finished

[dramasnot6]

the use of tense is a bit confusing. Maybe clarify the subject matter a bit. It is a lovely message though. Well done :thumbs_up