I don't know how you do it...

[SmilesAF]

Walking along,
It’s raining a bit,
I don’t really mind,
It always does.
I’m tired ‘cause,
It’s Monday morning,
I get on the bus,
I look around,
I spot you looking out,
Is it you?
It is…
Do you see me?
My clothes are soaked,
My hair’s a mess,
I’m feeling cranky,
And slightly crabby,
I walk forward,
As the bus starts,
Stumble,
And almost fall,
You look up,
You smile,
And again I feel all warm inside,
Don’t know how you do it,
But you did,
You laugh a little,
I must look kinda comical,
I shake my head,
And sit down
Next to you.
How do you do it?
When I’m with you I feel stronger,
Better, Happier,
And it’s every time!
I don’t know how you do it,
But I love you for it…

[navalpablo]

Keep it up sunni. At the rate ur going, ur going to have so many poems u wont no wat to do wid em. But they're all great

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[azmuse]

Joy comes through loud and clear.

[SmilesAF]

Writing about an emotion like love, should be words scribbled out of your pen as you think them, not thought about and re-written.

[azmuse]

and - ?
your point - ?

[azmuse]

Actually, i don't consider Any of my poems credible until i've searched the thesaraus at least 7 times for a synonymous word for each and Every mushy word and line i've written; am SOOOO anal retentive like that. :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

[SmilesAF]

Well, i know that feeling. Some how i find it a relief just to write what i want..... Some times it's better to work more on it. Depends on the mood i'm in...

[azmuse]

oh dear, hon, you took that seriously

[fayefaye]

I loved the start-perfectly captured that 'monday morning' feeling.

Originally posted by SmilesAF
Walking along,
It’s raining a bit,
I don’t really mind,
It always does.
I’m tired ‘cause,
It’s Monday morning,
I get on the bus,
I look around,
I spot you looking out,
Is it you?

[SmilesAF]

Why thx. I like the begining as well. And the end.

[Teacher]

great it was ok spice it up abit put a rap decall in it :rage: