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joynone
12-06-2006, 10:57 AM
Autumn Thoughts

By Ma Zhiyuan



Withered vines, olden tree, evening crows;

Tiny bridge, flowing brook, hamlet homes;

Ancient road, wind from west, bony horse;

The sun is setting,

Broken man, far from home, roam and roams
Virgil
12-06-2006, 12:06 PM
Autumn Thoughts

By Ma Zhiyuan



Withered vines, olden tree, evening crows;

Tiny bridge, flowing brook, hamlet homes;

Ancient road, wind from west, bony horse;

The sun is setting,

Broken man, far from home, roam and roams

I love that. That is really beautiful.
Laindessiel
12-06-2006, 12:08 PM
Imagery-evoking. I can clearly and vivdly picture the scene.
joynone
12-07-2006, 07:26 AM
It is excited for me that you can understand her.
dramasnot6
12-07-2006, 06:36 PM
Thats really lovely. I love your imagery and structure.
joynone
12-08-2006, 01:45 AM
Thats really lovely. I love your imagery and structure.

it's not my poem
Avalive
12-20-2006, 03:11 AM
Simply great.