pencil thin ~a shadorma

[Susan Sonnen]

pencil thin
thoughts of compassion
up against
egoism
a narcissistic aura
hangs heavy and low
(c)2006 Susan Sonnen

[sanctus]

pencil thin
thoughts of compassion
up against
egoism
a narcissistic aura
hangs heavy and low
(c)2006 Susan Sonnen

Susan, just when I was about to abandon this section of the forum here I find a real poem. Thank you. The mind thought is wonderful. i was particularly fond of "a narcisstic aura" as a line!