Where are you?

[SmilesAF]

Where are you?

I find that people turn around,
As if they don't dare to face,
Whatever it is they fear or hide from.
I find my friends,
Not where i expected to find them,
but where i wish i hadn't found them.
People whom i once used to trust,
people who once trusted me,
The few i really cared for,
No longer find a friend in me.
I ponder at what i did,
I ponder of when and why,
And i wonder,
If it was really me,
Who made them say goodbye...

[WX6[ck]]

A very true subject. I kinda of find it hard to follow because the lines are little too long. Maybe if it was narrated* it would flow better.

"I find that people turn around,
As if they don't dare to face,
Whatever it is they fear or hide from."

fav lines.

[SmilesAF]

well, i figured i should have done a bit more work with it, but as i told you, i wrote it, in the moment, if you know what i mean... Didn't even think about what i was writing, just wrote whatever came to mind. I guess i was feeling sort of deserted at the time...
Thanks for the construktive critisism:)